Bleh...

No offense, but this song also seems to be everywhere, as in you can't really tell what the melody is doing. Everything gets distorted after a while. I don't really know what else to say, this song just needs a shitload of improving. As well, you shouldn't use those really recognizable Sytrus presets. The bass didn't really fit in either. Try making the clap on the 2's and 4's, as in kick, kick and clap, kick, kick and clap.

You need alot of work my friend. Sorry if I've disappointed you.

{DJ-HLS}

hmmmm

Well, i wasn't a fan of the intro, and the lead synth. It sounds like a clown circus synth. I'm also not a fan of non effective use of the crowd effects.... try a bit more to get them sounding more realistic to how a crowd would react. Since its really difficult i don't add that to my stuff (i did on one song and i don't think I'll ever do it again).

Like you said the transitions were not exactly smooth and flowing - The song did feel like it went all over the place.

I know its alot of criticism and I'm not trying to come down on you hard.

Let me tell you what u did do well:

The mix didn't seem too bad, the kick and percussion wasn't bad.... sometimes the hats were little to predominant, but it wasn't to bad. And the claps were fine. I did like about 1:25 ish for a bit, the synth was cool and the melody written was nice.

I'm not sure where you've come from, and this might be major improvements for you.... just keep it up, and the songs will get better. And i know i made fun of ya on the forum in the thread you made, don't take it personal thousands of people constantly self prmote their stuff.

Keep it up.

Later

I'll be nice and give it a 4 :) fight off those 0 bombers

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nice work in this!!!
u really r improving!!!
got to learn how to master the instruments... the kick was pretty weak in this..=/
the melody is pretty nice

hhmmmm I like it!

I clicked on this 'cause it's the newest added song, and i'm actually gettin' down with this!

great work!

Nice crowd FX

I like the track, but it sounds like your synth lead is out of tune with your bass. Otherwise a cool track.