Great job!

Alright, first of for the improvements, since I know this one is still in the progress...

- I want an realy nice hard/style/core kick in it, one that is punchie and hard, since this kick only is like 'puff puff pupu puff puff puff" not that great.
- make an 3rd lead, one that's more melodic, and is an bit changed from the original.

{Quality of the song.}

Man the begining lead was awesome!
Kicks are good, but could use more improvements as said above, and if you haven't got an good idea how to make one at your own, or you don't got the good samples for it tell me, I got em for ya. ;)
Anyways what interested me the most was that the song dragged me in by it's power, normally I get bored by listning to an song for like 1 minute.. But this song kept me in it forever, I looped it 4 times now, and loved to hear every bit.
You got to master an bit on the lead, and the cymbals and snare of the track. They are an bit too rushed for my meaning. And that creepy FX that aready started from the beginning may be dropped more often. It makes the song quite bored to hear for many people (not for me though.)

Ah well, I wish you the best of making the full track. I am quite out of my critism points here... Well you got to PM me when the full one is out.
I am willing to hear it and review it.
For now you get my 5/5 10/10.

Good luck!

-DJ-PHX

Repetitive.... but who the F%ck Cares???

The beat was really good i enjoyed it

Synths were very well structured

that bass drum was sick

i agree with corncamper it's repetitive but i really like this track

i can imagine when it's "really complete"

3/5, 6/10

As you say, it is beyond repitative. The lead synth is actually pretty good, even though the main melody is a bit boring and overused. That effect in the beginning is really nice, but keep it in the beginning. REALLY! it sounds horrible as a background sound. I miss a kick very bad. Your betweener backgroundsound needs a kick even more then i do.

This song has potential. You just need to god dang work alot with it. Good luck!!