This is ossim

if i was reord company i mite offer a job with a world tour

Nice!

I like it! The vocals are soothing. I feel some times as if the guitar is out of place. A bit harsch if you compare the calmness of the vocals. And try to mix the vocals more outside of the mix. Like useing a compressor and trying to EQ yourself in to hearing the Vocals more instead of increasing to vocals. And ur first take is nice. Just some places where it is outside the rythm. I know how hard vocals is to make. (I completly suck at singing) Though you are in tune most of the song.
And something I hate (which shouldn't be counted) is EZ drummer. It always sounds EZ drummer. Nothing else. Other then that nothing more I can criticize about. Nice arpeggios on the guitar.
Keep it up Cheers n beers.

Huh

First of all, you really have a nice voice...but you were a lil ashamed you just sang so quietly, just sing a lil more loud. BTW your doing well so im giving a 10/10

\m/ metal 4ever

Total awesome.

You've got a great clean voice, I'm anxious to hear what it sounds like when you really get going.
Guitars sound pretty good, piano sounds fine, overall a good tune that just needs a bit of lengthening.

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I'd appreciate it if you checked out my newest song: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/186604

Love the guitar

I like it, but I think the singing volume needs to be louder. I can hardly make out the words.