OMG.

total crap. It's horrible, I can't stand to listen to this thing you call music. This is called NOISE.

.... heheh, I love you Lou. It's Mike, and I'm jk. It's nice, you should put up the updated version it sounds so much smoother and better, and brokendeck is right, the bass is way too sudden in the 2nd half, it just jumps on you and some of the hi-freqs are way too sharp and it hurts your ears during a few of the parts. I'll probably find some other stuff, but that's with only listening to it a few times. Good work man, honestly, I think the revision of this song was your best created song yet, in all seriousness.

Very unique idea!

I liked the idea, but I think you need to work on equalizing it differently.