Excellent!
I have no idea whether being pretty wasted or not has anything to do with it, but I thought this rocked pretty hard. Excellent beat, VERY well put together.
I take pride in my musical criticisms, being very picky about form and how well everything flows, particularly with amateurs. And you sir, have done very well.
I congratulate you on creating here a tune that indeed makes our world somewhat more to live in. Human creativity makes a difference, it allows us to feel more than we're naturally capable of. This song, among many others, is one of them. To provide an experience we can run through our minds, something we can imagine...priceless.
Good job.