Weird...
It's strange hearing the exact same loops in someone else's song as in one of my own. You may not be using the same program, but you've managed to run across the same samples I have.
This song is a little confusing. It has three or four different themes. You chose to put in some sound effects that (may not have a clear key to them, but) are clashing with the key that most of your guitars play to.
No offense, but I'm not sure why this gets nearly fifty downloads, while none of my tracks have come anywhere close. Maybe I don't know what good music is.
Keep it up. :)