mmm Catchy

but it sounds to much like the sond angels crying..
but good.

Catchy melody

Pretty good. I like the melody. Like Zodiax said, a little more variety would help too.

im normally not into trance but....

this was really good, great melody, and a consistent tone
i would say add a little more variation, but all in all

5/5 nice job man

Reminds me of -

Haddaway - What is love
You know, baby don't hurt me. etc.
anyways, good work, i like it alot.
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