good but needs work on a few things
my 6 of ten is my over all impression and is not meant to be taken personally if it offends you but i have a few reasons. one of the the things you must watch out for especially with side-chained offbeat bass lines like this is its interference with the kick and other bass parts, there seems to be a but of interference between your kick and bass, it could just be me, but try to EQ them so they are in separate frequency spaces.
as for the lead, it was really good but the res or distortion on it was a little bit too high, turn that down and it will sounds great.
i did like the build at :35, it was awesome, i also liked the claps. this track was pretty good but it could use some work, but it has the potential to jam harder than it already is.
keep up the music man.