Has potential...

Nice bass line, cool melody line, love the beat. I like the bass sound, but everything else has a sort of generic sound. I hate the buzzy sound that goes through it. It would be fine in VERY small doses.

The only other thing is that the track is mixed too low and there is almost too much “space” in the track, maybe you should over saturate the mix and compress or limit it so it sounds more in your face.

My $0.02,

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