nice
Couldn't hear the hook too well, and it didn't make as much sense as the rest of the song.
BBbut good job though
Just a track i did with my hermano from another madre.. ha! :P
Hook Written By: GhostRyTa
Verses Written By: JoCa (A.K.A. Kandy Cain)
****LYRICS***
Intro:::
Yeah
This one goes out
to everyone whos havin a hard time in their relationship
I just need you to let them know that you always there for them
Never let your one true love go
Verse 1 (JoCa):::
I'm lookin back on all the memories of us
and I cant stand thinking this could be the end of us
I've waited
so long
for someone like you to come along
your love plays a beautiful melody to sing my hearts song
I'm tired of all of this fighting its not worth our time
I won't let another man cherish what was once mine
we need to stop and think about it before we say things
because we never know what could the next day bring
I couldnt go one day without hearing the sound of your voice
carry the words that lets me know I made the right choice
to keep you in my life and thats how it needs to be
I'll always be here for you baby, no need to cry for me
HOOK x2 (GhostRyTa):::
Don't Cry For Me
You know that I'll be there like the seven seas
In a world of emotion still holding you tight
Loving you right
Verse 2:::
I just wish there could be
one way I could show you
how much you mean to me
how much I need you with me
I dont want you to leave
just stay there
I'm coming right back for you
and I know you feel like im not there by the way I act toward you
but
I'm never gonna give you up
nothing in the world could make me wanna live without
my baby
my angel
my one and only lady
I'm drivin you crazy
but only you have given me place to be
you give me the smile that I proudly wear daily
but it seems like there ain't nothing that can fix the way you feel lately
but keep in mind
that sometimes
you gettin tired of me
I'm still here baby
no need to cry for me
HOOK x2 (GhostRyTa):::
Don't Cry For Me
You know that I'll be there like the seven seas
In a world of emotion still holding you tight
Loving you right
Verse 3 - Outro:::
I know I ain't been acting right
but tonight is the night
I'm gonna make everything alright
you give me the will to fight
you've shown me the light
and let me take flight
I'm gonna do everything in my strength
I've had my time to think
and I've come to realize
this ain't a fantasy baby, this is real life
and we all need someone to love right
HOOK x2 (GhostRyTa):::
Don't Cry For Me
You know that I'll be there like the seven seas
In a world of emotion still holding you tight
Loving you right
nice
Couldn't hear the hook too well, and it didn't make as much sense as the rest of the song.
BBbut good job though
Yeah. get that alot. need to learn to eq better. lol.. as far the hook goez. what throws people off are the seven seas part. metaphor heaven man. by seven seas i basically meant what was goes on in the seas. telling a girl that no strong winds, currents, tropical storms, hurricane type of depressing emotions can ever keep me from loving and being there for her. lol
Beeautiful!
Looooooooooooove it ;)
:D. thanks
woah...
daym bro. i gotta give u props 4 this one. One of the best on Newgrounds.
thanks man. much appreciated.
Is this for real ?
Well, i'm not sure at all about your friend "JoCa"... I don't really like his flow and his voice doesnt fit that song at all... But YOU "GhostRyTa", if you're the one singing the chorus, you are serious business fella' ! Seriously, try pulling out a solo, your own lyrics and everything, your voice fits this perfectly, you'd probably fit on many more beats out there.
Professional voice, good stuff !
Keep it classy,
-Max
:P :P Thanks Max.. Appreciate That Man.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.