Indeed epic (Most of it)
You did this in 10 mins? Shit man! I'd love to make something that hard and fat in that amount of time! Yes, yes, the voices are waaaay to loud, are poorly placed and the amount of distortion throughout the song is massive (which is why you get an 8 and not a 10), but it gives that bass so much "UMPH!" Love it!
Please for the love of... me... buy FL Studio 8 and finish this song and make ALL of it epic! I've tried using the demo for hours and couldn't get anything this good. Well done... 8/10, 5/5, D/L!