Sometimes it's so frustrating when you don't have inspiration to make music!
I have converted that piece of frustration into music.
So maybe you don't like it, but i got rid off my frustration by making this song.
Please listen to the whole song, because it gets better at the end.
I would appreciate it, if you rated & reviewed :-)
MH16
Nice
This was a nice piece the sound was good and you gave it some quality the style of it all was nice you made it work well nice job there and that bass sound was really nice flowed along just perfectly so nice job here I look forward to even more
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes as this was some nice work
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WHOA!!!
I like it a lot! It has a cool groove to it man! And the guitar is bitchin'!
There are a few things I think you could tweak. The percussion is kinda weak. You should really compress the fuck out of the kick. And then raise it a bit in the mix. That would really help a lot.
The cymbal crashes seem to be distorting a bit in places. Not sure what is going on there, but you might want to work on them a bit. Because their sound isn't tight.
Also, you should vary your beats a bit more. Pretty standard and straightforward, which is ok. But you should change it up throughout the song to keep it interesting for the listener.
The bass is pretty standard sounding. It sounds kinda like it is from a pc generator. It doesn't truly real, which kinda dampens the effect it has on the song.
The electric guitar is awesome! The riff at 1:14 is fucking awesome man! Simple as can be, yet grooooooooooooooooooovy! Love that section.
As for the structure of the song, I think you could add stuff both vertically and horizontally. Maybe add another instrument or two throughout the song. And definitely add another section or two. Maybe another verse, chorus, or a bridge even. It definitely should be longer.
Overall though, this is a kickin' tune man!
4/5 and 8/10 overall. I liked this a whole fucking lot man!
Nice work bud!
-Gravey-
Thanks for this helpful review!
Maybe i'll get back to this song someday and do what you just said, but i'm currently working on a song as you can read on my userpage :D
Again, thanks for this review!
MH16
ok.....
the first guitar is good but the low pitch one.... the drums really go with the title, the song is repetitive when it comes to sounds but in rhythms it changes, in the progression part(by the middle) you should return to the lead rhythm in more progressive manor, slow kicks then a speed up that how its done.....
Thanks for the review!
(Sometime i just don't know how to respond on a review with good advice :P)
Not bad.
I think what would have made this submission sound so much better is some heavier guitar towards the end of the song. Right around 1:28 (after the song slows done, which I would like to add sounded perfect where you had it) I think you should have went into a much faster heavier sound with the guitar. Something like a solo would have worked perfectly there.
You had a lot of variety in the song though and it was a fun fast paced song to listen to. Really good job all around.
Overall - Perhaps needed to be a little bit heavier so it could related to the rage that you were talking about in your author comments.
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great rhythm
really nice rhythm, the drums are pretty much awesome i loved them and the guitar was very well used and added in the right time, the song changes a lot, i liked that, the beginning was my favorite part, i feel it got a little more calm at the ending, that's why
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
FairSquare 
