hehe

yeah.....

it was good, but no your best...

Nice

I love it its sooooo technoy.

kool

kool man thanx im gunna use it in the flash intro for my site. www.mogly2.tk if u wannasee but it wont be up for a while.
oh and btw the ratings i didnt no what to put so there all five

reviewing as i listen...

nice riff there the rhythm's pretty cool... when the other instr's come in, i was expectin a change in the bass notes, otherwise theres almost no change. actually... i havent heard a potential change in the bass note throughout..

ur last riff goes something like... C Eb G Bb (or along those lines).. i wud vary the last Bb between other notes that can add variation to the riff, like D Eb F mayb even B if u feel especially crazy...

good instrumentation... the rhythms are good too. my biggest suggestion is: drop those bass notes 1 or 2 octaves so they can set the mood. vary the chords with one or two note changes. and relate melody and accomp somehow