Scott
I realize this is more a journey than music, but i feel it needs a melody you can follow. When those high pitched violins kick it almost made me anxious for some kinda beat to drop or some melody to kick in, but it didn't. That evoked a mix of emotions which is always nice, but i feel this could use maybe more of that piano you started it with.
You wouldn't get any better if i wasn't honest
3/5 7/10