LOL
Of course you can pull of the slurs. xD
JK It was awesome. I'll talk to you later dude. Not your best. But really good.
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So like there's this clock outside my room that's friggin' loud.
Well one, night I Started having a dream aboUt it, like a music dream, ever had one? There wasn't really any visual accompaniment, just started dreaming up a song. This is the Best I could transpose it.
Short and sweet and to the point, supposed to kinda make you sLeepy. and YES It does sound like Clairvoyance a bit.
Anyway enjoy, night C:
NOTE: Did soMe edIts, if you haveN't listened recently, tAke a gander C: ..... L
(ya i was bored.)
Aeris responds:
Haha thanks, i agree it's not my best x3 but meh i thought the concept was cool C:
cool
This is a very intesting track but the bass sucks. Its not bad, its just too 'muddy' is the technical term :P
Its awesome but It needs more work and needs to be longer.
hmm...
not bad, but i have an idea for a piano part addition and a little bit of a bassline, would you mind a collaberation?
send me a pm if your interested.
I like it...
But I don't love it. ;-) I really love the idea and concept behind this. You captured the essence of a dream with the strings accompaniment. And the clock theme is cool.
I give ya a 7/10, because I love the concept and your ability to create based on that concept. But musically, this is EXTREMELY simplistic and rather short. You should expand on it a bit, and maybe add a second layer of strings. Maybe a layer that has a completely different timbre than the ones you used already. Also, it would be neat if you experimented with the sounds of many clocks in certain areas of the song, leading up to a crescendo. And then the soft landing at the end.
These are just ideas. Ya know, helpful criticism. But overall nicely done, I enjoyed this a lot.
Aeris responds:
Thanks, I'll get to work asap, i think i'll take up roojrotc's collab offer on top too.
I like these kinds of reviews C:
Kool!
I liked it all
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