Ok.
I definatley agree with the 1:55 synth, also, I think you're using to many diminished chords, I rarely hear a resolve-which will tie together most sections of the piece and make people want to listen more. Just a thought.
Author Comments
Another old song:) A song from my deepest thoughtsXD
RoninAway responds:
the way you said it, I do understandXD It's just that I'm a beginner, and beginners have a thing for melting things together to make it easier, I think OO Anyways, I've learned for the future! Thanks for review :)
cool
like the other two said, that synth doesn't fit, try another sound or skip it :P
RoninAway responds:
Haha, yeah, thanks^^
Agreement
I agree with terrydog about 1:55 synth. Doesn't flow with it.
RoninAway responds:
Yeah you`re right, too late now though:( Thanks for review:)
Could be in a movie
Seems like it could be in a movie after someone dies, inspires that sad thought mindset. Not so sure about the synth at around 1:55, it doesn't really seem to fit to me.
4/5 8/10
Terrydog
RoninAway responds:
Cool:D Yeah, unfortunatly I can`t change it since I used a demo. Thanks for review:)
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 661
- Downloads
- 57
- Score
- Waiting for 1 more vote
- Uploaded
- Jan 13, 2009
- 2:42 PM EST
- Genre
- Ambient
- File Info
- Song
- 2.3 MB
- 2 min 32 sec
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