Hey man.

I'll give yeah my honesty, so you can become better. I see potiential in you man. My suggestion in general is to add more melodies to accompany the main one. As for the main melody, elaborate on it, like make variations of it, of not the same thing over and over but hey man, you're own kind of hip hop.

I dig the drums in this, they're good man.

- DofS -

Same as everyone else...

I like the direction you're going with this, like you tried something really grimey and dark and it does give off that feel but the problem is some of melodies are off. Like they say, practice makes perfect so I'm pretty sure that you'll get the hang of it, you're drums were the strong point on this track so keep improving on that and make sure you get your notes on point. I'm not a producer so I can't say a lot of things in detail but I can tell you tried so just keep working on it, stay up.

It's good, but

There are a lot of off notes in here as Druid said. For instance, those 5th and 6th notes in your bass progression don't really fit that well. I did like your drums though man, and it is a good job of making a dark feeling. Keep working at this man, I'm sure you can make it great.

Not bad

its not bad I guess, a lot of off note... you know some notes your like "wow thats not fitting" the drums arnt bad I will give you that but you need a lot of work on synth style and note progress. keep working at that and Im sure you will get it down dude.

Pretty Good!

I liked the dark, ambient feel of the music, and the drum beats behind it. You pulled those 2 things together and made a great song out of it.

Good job, and keep up the good work!

-=DM692=-