yeah..

Nice drums, and nice strings, I really liked them.
Keep it up

5/5
4.26 / 5.00 (+ 0.032)

Nice

Nice beat riff mayne, it'z mega hot
The string riff's hot too man...

5/5

man

this is really good dude. i wish i knew more about making beats and shiz then id tell you more important things then "this is really good dude" lol. but yeah man i like it and i like the way you made the beat drop quick. so i disagree with omgwtfcritz on that part. but good job man!

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Melody is great, the blend is nice, but the execution wasn't so great.
Keep it up.
5/5

Nice

Bout' time you made shit like this man, haha.

Good Things:
-Liked the string intro obviously.
-Like the way you used a basic "off to war" type snare to take the beat rather than a hip-hop type one.
-Nice brass, impressive.
-Nice string melody variations, Iike how you kept this song from being too repetitive.
-Smooth ending.

Bad Things:
-The snare drop at around 22 seconds was cool, but I think like 3 or 4 slow heavy beats would've worked better than that rapid kinda roll for the drop.
-At 48 seconds, I feel like heavy timpani hits would've worked better rather than that dull sounding kick.
-That recurring jingling bell effect in the background really got on my nerves and sounded kind of random.
-Choir woulda worked really well in this song.

Good job man, do more stuff like this, haha. 5/5, peace.