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the beat is louder than your voice or maybe im deph o ..
Author Comments
*EDIT: lowered the beat and added an ending*
NEW MIC=D although effort is still lacking, lmfao. I dno how it happened but it did, at least it sounds nice=D lol, anyway um chorus sorta clashes but you get the point, the beat by CJB100 - "Freestyle Rap Beat"
Sample from "Super Lyrical" - Big Punisher
umm ok u guys can have the lyrics 2=D since some of u r slow, lol:
Super lyrical embodied to punish
rip out ya Mole C U less ya dig?
Make new holes u posses
relieve stress
like needles to baloons
Make u look like a prune
Take shots at me but I'm imune
extract cardiac like heart of steel
feel my contact n turn to gold
broken, u scratchin now cold
Need L E? feel better buddy
Addicted to me
follow demands cuz I'm the supply
Please standby uz chicken I'm popeye
Ima eat u alive fuck fryed
I'ma rip open this spinach
You ain't ready u finished
You fucked cuz rap is my fetish
Rip you in 2
So say I double you
Cuz you half the man I am
Son I'm triple say the world wide web
Cum at me, oh u jus an egg
I'm armed a hammer
fix em like bad grammer
U heard I'd (red)read you make u equal with ground
knife between the lines face needle not around
after the point round
That .22 sound to real numbers
Fake lumbers tumbles
cuz I wood plant trees on deaf foes
But I burn down they lines like cornrows
So I slash and burn these fakes bootleg
Hah timberland promise land dude dig
This if I miss expect craters
Hit haters show less than 3(<3 for you dumbasses) but I'm greater
Broken-Needle responds:
long as u hear me, I dun rly care but I'ma keep it in mind on the next track,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
not bad flow
Good to hear a track by ya that's not just full of "Fuck RoobyKillAll". Sounds like you've started following your beat a lot better in this track. Good lyrics, keep up some decent shit man and keep workin' at it. Actually listened to the whole thing.
Broken-Needle responds:
lmao, glad you enjoyed it, its really the mic doin the flow for me, lol it feels like shit ain't a waste of lyrics anymore, anyways
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Hm...
Well lyrically you have a...hm....very unique flow I guess lol, decent metaphors. And ironically I used that less than three shit in a verse I wrote myself lmao XD but anyway, that mic was VERY MUCH NEEDED lol. Sounds a ton better than your previous stuff. I'll give you the 5 :P
Broken-Needle responds:
lmao, thank you expect much better flow and even better quality sound with projects to come, also I'ma b more active soon as I get rid of this cold. Thank you for the review and 5, oh and the less than 3 is one of my fav's to mention, you can do a lot with it long as you know your words,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
The best
Thanks for putting it up!! =D =D =D Great flow, perfect words and beat
I wuv it<3
Broken-Needle responds:
<3 almost as good as u<3
Credits & Info
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- Uploaded
- Jan 21, 2009
- 6:35 PM EST
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 4.5 MB
- 3 min 17 sec
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