Made with love, you say?

I think it's very moving. It's got interesting arrangements and stays fresh throughout.
I think the mix is pretty good. Perhaps Psy-nigma was meant to infer that it is ready for mastering! :)

with more mastering

this would sound awesome.

reminds me a little of rattatat and the piano melody reminds of another song i've heard.

neat concepts in your song with better verse arrangement this could be a powerful and great song.