Thanks to Gravey1, this is the final version (maybe). See, unlike you people, he actually leaves reviews that help me out. So if you are giving me a bad score, and not leaving a review, then screw you. I can't get any better if I don't know why I suck. I know I suck, but I don't know why. So if you tell me why I suck, tell me how I can improve. For the people who like my stuff, I thank you and hope you enjoy this.
---jbarnett---
Nice Bud...
I like it a lot actually. You made some very nice changes structurally for this song. I really like the break at 1:22. Fucking awesome moment right there for sure!
And you shortened the intro a bit, thanks you. Structurally I think it helped a lot. Oh and the break around the 2:05 mark is awesome as well. The ending simple, yet tasteful.
Overall really good. 5/5 and 10/10 I'ma give you, because I know you worked really hard on it. And it sounds really good.
-Gravey-
Holy shit thank you!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
jbarnett 
