Below was me lol

Just to elaborate some more, try mixing up your patterns and playing with different sounds.

Way too repetitive

Honestly man, try mixing it up a bit more. I appreciate you tried adding another line in, but it was weird enough that it just sounded like random noise. Keep working at it though man, you can make something cool out of this likely

Hmm...

It was really just the same thing played over and over...and it definitely didn't suit my tastes at all. Your song ended at 1:23, so there was 11 seconds of nothingness there. It was just...short and repetitive.

Cut off that extra time, throw in some more sounds, mix it up a little, maybe add some deep voiced vocal sounds. Sorry bud, but I really don't like this.