It's ok
It really sounds like a work in progress. It sounds a bit too mechanical and uniform. The first 30 seconds were quite good, but then it got kinda boring. I don't know what else to say. It needs more work.
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WORK IN PROGRESS
Something I'm working on. It's a project that has been really fun, and uses a time signature (3/4).
As you can see, it's in Ebm, which is a new key for me. It's still in it's early stages and nowhere near being done, but it will be one of my songs on my EP album I'm trying to get done in the next few months.
happy early v-day
Darkmaster603 responds:
Yea, I'll have to work on that. Lately I've been having trouble accepting my work, so maybe I'll just let what happens happen instead of trying to make everything sound "good". Thanks for the critic, it defiantly has me thinking of new things for this song.
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