Smooth

Well this was a nice and smooth piece you have here some very good voice that made the song even better some parts could be better with the voice but for what it is. It's notbad at all it's very intense and the music itself is notbad so nice job just polish the voice just a tad but overall I liked what you have prepared for us here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some polish on the voice is needed

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your boyfriend must have been glad:D

I liked it and your boyfriend must have been glaf cause its a beatiful song :)

Hmmm

It's an emotionive piece, music is smooth, but the voice doesn't quite fill the gap. Some words are harder to hear than others, seems a bit artificial at times, and not always the right tones. Overall it's a good track though, keep up the good work!

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is nice...

pretty nice, good lyrics, the song is nice, i like how he sings... with the music it fits very well, such a nice calm rhythm, is a little to slow at some points, but isn't bad
maybe after some time i you get a little 'tired', but not because the song is boring, it's because this is making me sleep... nice effect you got there, but maybe it was too much... was nice anyway

5'd

I absolutely love the experimental styles used here. Definitely a trippy song.

Probably my favorite part of the song was the guitar in the "foreground" that sounded as if it were far away. That's a neat trick.

As far as vocals, I think the guy below me nailed it.

At any rate, keep it up!