Well...
It got off beat a little bit in the beginning.
It's also short and lacks power, but I'm not one to speak; My songs do that, too!
Anyways, good song, keep it up!
Author Comments
This is my first submission to Newgrounds. This song was made 100% manually on garageband, and is not only my first submitted attempt at a manual garageband song, but my first attempt at a manual garageband song period. Please leave reviews and be completely honest, I want to learn to get better, and criticism will help. Thanks.
TheDimes
TheDimes responds:
Hey thanks! I'm new to creating my own songs, and I'm looking for feedback to help me get started. I'll try to make longer, stronger songs in the future. Thanks!
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 595
- Faves:
- 1
- Downloads
- 43
- Score
- Waiting for 4 more votes
- Uploaded
- Feb 12, 2009
- 9:31 PM EST
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
- Song
- 1.2 MB
- 1 min 17 sec
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TheDimes Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
