Franswa - Cliche

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Franswa - Cliche

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Okay, so I worked on this one until time blurred and reality distorted itself. I started at about 9:00 or 10:00 P.M. and got this far by about 5:00 in the A.M.. I wanted to go to sleep early but, as always, I got mad distracted! lol xp

So if you guys would be so kind as to rate and review!!

Also, If your gonna score 3 or lower, please let me know why!!!! this is just the first version of the song. I am gonna be working on it, so any constructive criticism is appreciated.

***EDIT***

OKAY this is a slightly different version. After a night of sleep i did some simple rearranging to get a bit more fluid sound. I also changed the name... I can't really think of a name for this one!! )&

It's still not done, but The other version was annoying the fuck out of me so I fixed a few small things and am now In the process of adding a few more instruments, This has kinda been a test song to see if sample tank had any good presets. I guess it has, one or two, lol. I like the sound of the guitars, but I need to work on what they're playing.

Remember, comments and reviews are much appreciated!!! It will help me make this song a shit load better. Especially CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!!! I've never really gotten anything else... other than the normal mindless blather. So if you feel inspired, or hell, even if your not, leave something!

Oh and like I asked earlier, please Let me know why you give songs score of 3 or less. I know three is not bad, but It will still help me out if you leave me a little something! Most of my songs don't really score below 3 any way, but it's for those people who hear that hella off putting part that I'm just not catching.

Thanks!

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FireFeenux

2009-09-22 19:11:39

Titeness Bro

Dude I Only Gave U Nine Cuz The Hats Were Just Off To Me... Idk The Hats Sound Like Shakers To Me Even Though Their Clearly Not... But Idk I Think Its A Great Song All In All.. Till Nextime...

ibehedward

2009-03-24 11:12:39

NICE track

i was feeling this song alot, but i wasnt sure
if it was something i wanted to use..
that is.. UNTIL about 0:57 with that
drum kick (i believe?).. then i knew this
had to be used.

EternalXIII responds:

Thanks, I liked the kicks that come in later two. They almost got cut out! Someone said they felt they hit to much, but I liked em so I left them in. This is 110% me, no samples.

gamedesign

2009-03-01 12:29:03

nice

Great 5/5 10/10 !!!!!!!!!

EternalXIII responds:

thanks man, glad you liked it

Gasmasq

2009-02-27 14:31:58

Only thing...

I'm totally distracted by whatever that is panning back and forth. At least that's what it sounds like it's doing. The ambient strumming sound... Idk.

EternalXIII responds:

Yeah so i think you're talking about the organ I used. It's really weird and plays unevenly to the left and right. Lol, yeah this beat is not really that good. I doubt i'll even work on it. Guitars just don't sound good at all unless they're live, or used by someone who can tweak the fuck out of it... Or if they use Ministry of Rock *drools in his pants* I want it so bad. lmao. anyways thanks for the review.

Blasphem-E

2009-02-16 13:17:10

Not bad

I like it. Personally can't hear the problem with the kicks, but I'm using stock speakers so I can't confirm there is no problem with this. I might drop a freestyle on this, I know you said you wanted to hear people on your tracks.

EternalXIII responds:

HEllshyea! Shit I'm using some pretty crappy headphones, so taht could be a problem! I'm not really sure what the guy beneath you meant though. Oh well, like i said this is not nearly a final version.

Thanks for the review!