i agree with ryeguyhead...

ya i noticed that too...ive got everyone of NIN's cd's...you were close but not there....still its kinda good..=)

Im in the middle

alright...i saw what you were going for, but you sort of failed. the drums in the beginning lasted a little too long before throwing in some diversity. The bass was decent i guess, but it wasnt really enough to carry the song, the strings were a little odd, but not as quite as odd as the interlude part where everything breaks and goes back to the bass. I dunno. I guess it wasnt awful, i can tell you worked hard on it, but not quite there