Same

i like that song too i think its very good but i think the previous poster is right.
if ya change that ill rate 10/10

Getting there

I am not willing to call this submission complete yet. There is a lot of promise and beauty to be un-covered.

My suggestion is that you mix up the piano in the background a little more. In the same way it is mixed up in the beginning of the song. Along with that, tune it down so it fades into the background just a little bit more to help make it a little less raw.

Other than that, this is a great song. It has originality, it is catchy and has a good feel to it. Keep up the work.

-RSC