Surrealism, lovely!

This second time around I can truly grasp the mood you've been setting out for us listeners. With creative and influential surreality your re-enhanced track has left me in a lovely state of serenity and curiousity.
I am glad to see that you decided to continue working on it and you sure did not leave me disappointed! The only part that I could really nitpick on would be the transection at 02:59. It left the track with a shockingly abrupt end to my great dissatisfaction...
Rest assured however for you met up to my expectations (for what they are worth) and rose even higher!

Thank you :)
- Duggins

Progression

progression of your technique from part 1 to this is noticable. This sounds like a Sim City 4 song, or a chill version of Command & Conquer Red Alert sound track. Very pro here. I don't know - bad: maybe some drum reverb is much but honestly I like it and i get your intentions with it and why it is there - I dont think u can change that without compromising the rest of the song. good: the synth, pads/layers are excellent. Half this music making process is simply just picking out sounds that go together. You are a natural at this im guessing... it shows. well done.

hmm..

this is kewl. slow, trancy peaceful. i like it. this is really calming.