Here are some ideas I've been working with. Still a lot to be done I suppose, and ignore the drums at the end. Forgot to take them out when I exported it, and I don't feel like redoing it since it's nearly 2:30am.
Opinions?
Nice build up
So this was a decent track and has a good build up about it love how it builds up with some unexpected sounds and the sound quality is really good would like more focus on some points like specific unique sounds but all in all this was cool very nice work
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Some more focus on some points but this was pretty good
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Great!
A nice and smooth industrial track this is, pretty simple, but with a steady beat and progressive additions all the way through, just how it's liked, keep up the great work!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
HarvestThrone 
