Awesome.

I made a bad soap opera where Lynnette finds our she's pregnant but not with Leo, and it's her much hated Bruce who is the father, but Bruce is with Sylvia who only wants him for the money that he stole from shady deals with Julia's father Richard, Julia who is indeed in love with Bruce and does not know he is using her to be rich and with Sylvia, let alone that he's the father of her SISTERS BABY, that's right Lynnette's related to Julia. Anyway she aborts it and this is the music that goes to it. Wire coathangers and purple drapes.

i like it

i like songs that sound like there is a lot of emotion behind them.
that might not be the case for this song, but it sure sounds like it!
i wish i was as good of a composer as you! (or anyone for that matter)
i think it was wonderful!

wonderful

You and my grandson play the same way by what you feel inside and not what is on a sheet of paper.He is also on new grounds maybe you might like to grade his work as you both play by ear his work is under ajgreen24.You do have a wonderful gift that only God has given both of you and I am sooooo glad you shair it with us 10 for ten and 5 for 5

I beleive this captures a sense of loss

or maybe fondly looking back on the life of a loved one (due the major flourshes)
I love piano stuff when its done well, and this is good if slightly long at the end, maybe after a bit more melodic variety by then. And the ending is a little too powerful and major i beleive, especially if you like to think the piece has its own sense of feel rather than telling a story, a less definate cadence would've worked better i think. Or if you like my idea of the feel, finishing on the B minor (relative minor tonic? sorry my theory isn't that great) wouldv'e worked well.
Still, nice song!

Nice

You're good at the piano man. Congrats.

From 0:00 to 1:47 this was perfect lounge-music to me.

However, I must agree with shatteredreamer. The conclusion didn't seem like one. I was craving a continuation ;o).

Fantastic job.