Nice composition.
I'll start by saying that one of the only reasons I didn't give it a ten was because of the mixing and some of the instruments used. I love the composition of the song, there's nothing wrong there. I think the quality of the song would be a whole lot better if the instruments used were higher quality. the instrument at :32 is actually nice, it gives a somewhat eery feel to the background and adds an adventurous feel as Bad-Man said. The drums sound like they're a bit muffled though (the patterns they play are still great though.) ;)
Great job overall.