THIS was your first song?

Wow I am quite impressed. I love it when I see people with 4/5 or better first songs. Good work bro. I am proud of you. My first song sucked. But I see a good future for you in music. You could become Gravey II (two). My only problem would have to be the repetition on this song. Try to put another melody in everynow and then please. But I do love that airy-rainforest effect you added.

4/5
9/10.

you deserve it

=)

cool

Good song, its good for youre first one. I cant write crap in music -_-.

((VOTED5))

This was a very interesting song. That synth riff definantly made this song stand out. If you ask me it's volume was far to low towards the middle of the song once the drums started.

And as great the slow synth riff at the very beggining was to set the mood, it could have been shortened just a little bit but definitely not done away completely.

Another thing that makes this song stand out is the great use of sound effect tracks like the thunderbolt when the drums started to signify the change in the song and to set up the background the title hinted at. You should try experimenting more with sound effects in your future work.

This was a great song. I'd love to hear more stuff like it.

Wow....

This song makes me happy......and sad at teh same time...

Great job. You may be the next Paragon X9