nice

damn ya'll kill it! Kurse rips shit!, listen to my diss i just put on newgrounds.

shits aight

its lacking a BANGIN hook
like, the hook coulda popped more
verses are hott, nice lyrics/flow

work on the vocal melody
like, not as extreme as tech nine
but like
make it flow more

off the map

This song is ill

Fo shizzle my nizzle

I don't usually expect much from the hip hop artists on newgrounds but this gave me faith. Great stuff. I love the chorus or the hook or w/e you hip hop rappy fellers call it :P

All gud

Check mines out http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/234684