I Think...

...it is an irrelevant question because we all die in the end.

But as for the song, it is interesting. :-P

I like the idea behind this. The rolling chords are always a good idea. But they are so constant that it almost becomes obnoxious to an extent. You should really think about breaking them up differently throughout the song.

I do like how it builds up to the ending though. That is a good idea, and has a very nice effect overall.

Maybe you should think about adding some other instruments to this song. Piano seems like it would fit well. As well as a nice harp sound. I really think the harp would fit perfectly in a piece like this. I think it would add some nice color to it. Especially if you added a piano as well.

Some reverb on the guitar wouldn't hurt as well. It would give it a distant quality to it. And I think that would have a very positive impact on the listener.

Overall though, not bad. 3/5 and 6/10 overall. Nice job here bud.

Best of luck on future projects.

-Gravey-