I agree.

It definitely needs some lower tones to balance it out, it sounds too high pitched. Are there any loops you have that could capture that? If not, I guess you're in trouble. Anyway, it sounded good, nice choice of loops. At about 1:10, though, it totally changed moods. No warning, no bridge, nothing. Not bad, just a little rough.

nice

I really like this. it does a good job of capturing the ethnic flavor yet still staying easily accessable. It was kind of missing a low end for most of the song, but i dont know if you were going for that or not.