What the fuck is wrong with you?

sdf leaves a ton of information that you can draw from and become a better artist and you just take a shit on him.

Anyway, too many FL presets, the mixing is poor, but it does actually sound as if it's music, so some points for that.

RD_Snare10

I can't get all the way through this. There are many volume fluctuations, very little bass, very poor mixing, and mostly annoying/confusing drums. The notes sound pretty good, just make it so that the sounds that are playing them are better. :)

You have some cool, original ideas for how to make sounds, which is a very, VERY good starting point on here. The sample that you took of the song, and then used temporarily for a melody was pretty cool, but it wasn't the right volume-- did you normalize it?

Don't use default FPC drums, you can put your own samples in there, and I suggest you do so.

Overall though, the most glaring problem that will probably turn people off of this is the absolutely non-existent bass. Didn't anyone teach you that that's all anyone listens to when they're listening to music? :)

Keep writing!