I like the genre and the mix was pretty decent, but the song kind of gets linear. It starts to go somewhere but then doesn't.

This is a great first draft I think.

Great song! Just don't like the vocals. Probably because I didn't put in any vocals in my songs, but still great song otherwise!

bad.

but has slow buildup and the rythem just isn't good.

ur on ur way

u just gotta keep trying. its not terribly bad, but lacking in some areas...

kinda messy

It was alittle bit all over the place, it didn't really have a flow, and often you build up the song up and then don't go anywhere with it, but still, not horrible.