its ok

i have to agree with the other comment,but as they say with practice u will get better.but it was a nice try at least unlike some of the people who do flash who dont care what the people think.just keep trying.

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I think you need to learn some scales, or at least make use of them in FL Studio, which is most likely the program you're sitting in. (Sounds like it, anyway).

Because the melody is very off and it feels like you've punched out notes at random. Very disharmonic.