Well, someone suggested I extend the into and give it an ending. So I got started on it, and decided it would make an awesome loop, even at 2 1/2 minutes long, so when I rendered it I had FL studio wrap it into a nice neat loop, and here it is for your enjoyment. I'm thoroughly pleased with this one, and I hope you will be as well.
Edit: Please listen to the whole song before you vote. I want to avoid people listening to the intro and voting before the song really starts. Thanks a lot!
And leave some feedback! I want to know what I can do to improve if you don't like it!
Cool!
Definitely an improvement from the first! Good job!
I see you took my advice and extended the intro, and you even created an ending.
A lot better than the previous version! You still have the same sound from the last version, and added a new twist to it. I like it!
Voting Details: Current Score - 3.74
Voted 5 - raised to 3.93
Voter # - 9
Good job man!
Ninjakoopa
~The Koopa Clan~
Bravo!
Very well done piece of work!
A real head-bobbingly good song!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
obliviousfafnir01 
