ok,

you got started, that's a good thing but.
try not to use only one melody, or use one melody and at least make some variations.
i think everyone would agree if I say this is a rather boring song, if you heard the thme once, ne next second you're tired of it.
The drums are at the beginning kindo weard, i head some stuff not fitting in the total song, but good beginning for your drums.
you will imporve, probably, so i wich you luck.

Einb.