several flaws

the melody line? very pretty. all that other stuff you have going on? not so much. no offense but it just gets kind of muddled and repetitive. theres some parts also that just seem out of tune as well. i would try to focus more on making this a groovy peaceful tune rather than a hard trance ballad. the simple drum line and melody work brilliantly together.
anyways thats my two cents worth

Sweet Jesus

Holy shit. I am in the fucking zone right now. THis is beautiful.

Sweet...

i feel as if im journeying through a magic forest on the back of a unicorn. the trees are sparkling and the sky is blue. then i ride out in the open and in front of me is a big pretty pink castle...

note: i was "not" on drugs when i made this review =P

sounds pretty