Not bad

Listen to other artists' tracks, listen to how they make the drumlines, bass. If you like to make music, if it is your way to develop yourself, then it will come to you, just keep trying.

not bad.

I feel it could of been better being that it just has the what? 4 instruments and the reverse cymbol at the end hah.. Anyway add more to this for sure its got alot of potential.

Wyldfyre1

I think it's pretty good.

Personally I think it's fine. Maybe the bass could have a deeper sound to it though.

Bass is funky

I think the beat couldve been a little better.

Pretty Sweet

REally techy.

you have some good instruments.

its really groovy and trippy.

I suggest a more diverse beat, more synths, and some vocal effects or something.

right now the song is just a "Fuckin around song"

fill in the gap to make it a real good song

but overall thats a good dose of trippy music, thnx