too harsh
this is a sort of uptempo version of Erik Saite's Gymnopedie i.
too harsh
It has the sort of sound of gymnopedia 1st...
But quite a different experience than the original gymnopedia. Still, with it being an upbeat sound, I enjoyed it very much.
Shaky allegro
Be more soft with your keys - it's not hammerfinger contest. And you did not really put an effort on your 6 notes base melody; you should develop more and vary your piece.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.