Its ok.
It's ok, nothing fantastic, but it's good its own right. Drums need a bit more definition, they should be a bit louder and the articulations on the strings need to be a lot sharper, it's a touch muffled because of that.
Good journeying feel combined with a sort of action idea to it, but you'll really need to work on the clarity and quality of the instruments, they sound synthesised, I heard a lot worse, but they do sound synthesised. You could create more depth with stronger backing combined with a foreground instrument. Brass works well in a case like this.
Again, drums need to be reworked, made louder and heavier as well as strengthened.
Yeah, there's a lot you could do. Keep it up.