my review :)
some sugestions for your song.
the strings are done realy well but id say make the intro a bit longer with the strings comming up softly.
the bass synth is to loud and to distorted. you should really fix that couse it doesnt really fit with the song. the pieuw sound doesnt fir either.
overall its nicely done. its just the bass synth thats a bit anoying.
keep up to good work!
7/10