Its pretty good not bad at all

I like the beginning, not so much the into but when it starts to build up. from the way the kick sounds, it looks to me like you use fruity loops. (same as me) anyways, when the song got to the buildup it pretty much was downhill from there, to be honest it just didint flow properly like the kick progression happened offbeat. and the lead was alright, but the notes sounded off. other than those few things you got yourself a pretty good song.