Not bad.

Pretty good song overall. But I do
have some critique for you. First
of all it doesn't really sound like
you have mixed any of your tracks.
With the proper application of filters
and some effects you could make it
sound a lot better. Also a few of the
tracks kinda sound out of place.
Like in the beginning when you
amplify the main chorus it kinda
sounds awkward. But not bad
overall. Keep em rolling.