NIIIIIICE!
THIS IS WICKED !!!!!
you get 9
work this into a good shit
Author Comments
The theme song for an organization called "Senile Administrative Defense" [SAD]. SAD was one of 2 feuding military firms in a story I was creating, which fell through very quickly. Still, I decided to use the name as a song title, because I wanted the name to be used in some way
It was okay
I mean for your alleged intention it was pretty good, the only thing I'm not liking is the tripplet against the duplet. That tripplet-drag you have going on the end of the straight 16th idea just feels out of place. The first couple times i thought it happened I thought I was buffering still or something. It reall turned me off from the piece.
The rest of the piece however is pretty good, as far as what you were going for. I'm not sure if dropping to exclusively low percussion as long as you did was as good an idea, however the re-entry of the melody was very well done and brought the intensity back to the song.
And again as far as battle themes go, I think you left the melody on its own two legs too soon for having about another 40 seconds left in the loop.
BallinFatty responds:
thanks. the triplet was actually not one of my better ideas, but to admit, i did get a little lazy and didnt change it. i actually didnt mind it after listening b4 the finished product came to be. and as far as the battle theme, i'm not good at making battle musc anyway. most of my stuff just sounds like.... music. but i'm glad you pointed out the good and the bad. elements of a good review!! (and helpful :D)
anyways, thanks again for the reivew, the 8, and your time in listening
*high five*
This is cool as hell. I loved the breakdown and the way that everything blends together. Normally I'm not too partial to repetition but you've prove that it's not a bad thing. :) Not a bad thing at all.
Myss Fly
BallinFatty responds:
thanks!! i glad you enjoyed it. sometimes a lot of my stuff gets repetitve, but thats just my style. again as a said b4, i didnt think this one would be that great, but i'm glad everyone thinks so. thanks again for the reivew, 10, and your time in listening
Nicely done!
I actually really like this one Ballin. The composition is pretty good, and with a little bit more depth on the instruments and maybe variation with the percussion this could definitely be a great original battle theme! Lots of potential when it breaks down at 1:26, so don't be too quick to shove this aside. Keep working on it!
BallinFatty responds:
thanks!! i'm glad you liked this one. i didnt think it would actulally be good, but after i posted it here, a few more listens, and i was happy with the way it turned out. i will definatly have to work more on this one some time in the future. thanks for your words. they mean alot
thanks again for the review, the 9 and your time in listening!!
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