((VOTED3))

This song started off sounding pretty good but started getting a little bit to chaotic twoards the end. I really enjoyed the first two bits but the strings just did not flow to well with the other tracks and caused to much clutter if you ask me.

A different drum beat could have been used to. Maybe it's just me but the hihat sounded really out of place with this type of music. This might just be because I'm using headphones and the hihat only comes out of the right but my point still stands.

You have a good foundation for a song, but some cleaning up needs to be done.